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emogamer · 10-31-2008, 03:13 PM

hmm...ok...I'll work on it...well that was my first poem I ever wrote so I wanted feedback on what specific things that needed to be fixed

10-31-2008, 03:13 PM	#8
emogamer Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Iowa Posts: 25	hmm...ok...I'll work on it...well that was my first poem I ever wrote so I wanted feedback on what specific things that needed to be fixed