Thread: My first poem
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Old 10-31-2008, 03:56 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by JCC
Less wordy?! It only has 31 words! The problem isn't that it's wordy, it's that you chose those specific words, and you chose them for a specific reason, and both selection processes are flawed.
I second that.
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