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HumanePain · 11-06-2008, 03:37 AM

It is striking, anything but boring which is good, and the imagery too.
As Grim said the flow was awkward, but still it was intriguing, it makes the reader think.

11-06-2008, 03:37 AM	#4
HumanePain Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: the concrete and steel beehive of Southern California Posts: 7,449 Blog Entries: 4	It is striking, anything but boring which is good, and the imagery too. As Grim said the flow was awkward, but still it was intriguing, it makes the reader think. __________________ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKm_wA-WdI4 Charlie Chaplin The Greatest Speech in History