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Dragoness2071 · 12-02-2008, 01:29 PM

"See my love, I cannot tell
Screaming what my hear begins to yell
I'll break my promise, set me free
Bring my love/Back to me
Here I am/The tower that fell
See my love/I cannot tell
Release my spirit/Set me free
Bring my love/Back to me."

Short and sweet, I know. But critique is much appreciated. :]

12-02-2008, 01:29 PM	#1
Dragoness2071 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Chicago Posts: 20	Love poem? What do you think? "See my love, I cannot tell Screaming what my hear begins to yell I'll break my promise, set me free Bring my love/Back to me Here I am/The tower that fell See my love/I cannot tell Release my spirit/Set me free Bring my love/Back to me." Short and sweet, I know. But critique is much appreciated. :]