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Originally Posted by isobel black
It always baffles me how few people know a poem or song is supposed to have meter. At least in the case of a poem you can claim it's free verse, but a song definitely needs at least a semblance of a steady rhythm.
So, colour me constructive. |
If you read the second song I posted it follows an iambicpentameter. Like I said it was originally a sonnett so I kept the same rythum when I expanded it. The first one I posted was a free verse, but I can change that later.