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Underwater Ophelia · 08-16-2009, 05:44 AM

It doesn't seem like you're really saying anything with this, and honestly, your wording is often way too clumsy and awkward to make it a smooth read. You have some good phrases here and there, but even those aren't magnificent.

08-16-2009, 05:44 AM	#4
Underwater Ophelia Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Earth. Posts: 8,001	It doesn't seem like you're really saying anything with this, and honestly, your wording is often way too clumsy and awkward to make it a smooth read. You have some good phrases here and there, but even those aren't magnificent. __________________ You lost the rep system for this.