Thread: The Angry Night
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Old 08-16-2009, 01:00 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia View Post
It doesn't seem like you're really saying anything with this, and honestly, your wording is often way too clumsy and awkward to make it a smooth read. You have some good phrases here and there, but even those aren't magnificent.
You're just mad because he didn't ramble on about butterfly bushes.
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