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Old 11-07-2009, 09:23 AM   #14
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here is one I wrote

It was all over with just one THRUST wish is to well as burn is to hell ashes to ashes dust to dust so stab me in the heart if you must
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Originally Posted by ForestMist View Post
There, a try of a teenage girl to become a poet. You know what you can expect.

About time:
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Light to darkness
Iron to rust
Cities lay in ruins
Empires fall
Great names will be forgotten by all


About love:
A rose that bleeds
A heart that needs
A little love
To stay above
All of the fears
To stop the tears
To make it feel
That something's real
That tomorrow's worth living
Something to be recieving
When all else is gone


Any advice?
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