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Old 12-01-2009, 09:02 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by HellforgedX View Post
Good lines, but


doesn't really sit well with me. Something about the order of the words, but for the life of me I can't think of anything else that would work, either. Kudos.
"Whom" - the word you crave is "whom".

"those whom you once loved" would work.
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