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Originally Posted by Apathy's_Child
To be blunt, it shows that you've never studied poetry or, I'd imagine, read a great deal of it before writing. The meaning wasn't strong enough to prop up the cliche - cliche only REALLY works in parodies once it's become cliche. I really think it's worth trying something different.
And however quickly you wrote it, that is not your natural voice unless you roll around talking like the bastard child of Celine Dion and Aragorn.
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well I know nothing of Aragorn, but celine dion yes and that's hilarious (of course I don't lol)
anywho, no I have never studied poetry, I've read things here and there but I was never meant to be a laureate, I am happy with my musical expression much more. I would however like to experiment more with poetry, but I'm not too sure what kind of poetry I even write. I know there's genre's but the only one I can closely relate to is "Lyric" because it's song like.
Any help here would be appreciated because lately I've just been writing and writing, it would be ideal if I could get a good basis for a song out of this too...
thanks again