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Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia
Look, I know you're not really in middle school, and I realize that adults go through rough times.
That doesn't make this good, and I'm not interested in your life. I don't have to know you to see that this, as far as value as poetry goes, is worthless.
I'm not interested in the things I say being nice, I'm interested in them being true. My only mistake in my initial post was not explaining exactly why this is worthless, but honestly, I feel like it's obvious.
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Maybe it is obvious...but constructive criticism would be a lot more considerate, and would help Amunet to improve her writing in the future. The criticism you have given is just pointless.