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Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia
That is childish, but it's good. The mood you've created is excellent. I'm not kidding when I say this--reading this reminded me of being a child when my mom would be all drunk and cracked out.
Fix this, and make the rhythm match the serious of the tone.
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Jesus UO, just damn.
I liked it MissC. Do you post poems often?