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MissCheyenne · 05-31-2010, 02:40 PM

Thanks. Even I can tell it's a bit rough round the edges, I just don't know what to do with it to make it better.I just started writing again after a period of writing nothing at all. I should dig out some of my older stuff for comparison. IMO, my old stuff is overblown and tried too hard. I like today's effort much better.

05-31-2010, 02:40 PM	#7
MissCheyenne Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: A ship called Dignity Posts: 1,919	Thanks. Even I can tell it's a bit rough round the edges, I just don't know what to do with it to make it better.I just started writing again after a period of writing nothing at all. I should dig out some of my older stuff for comparison. IMO, my old stuff is overblown and tried too hard. I like today's effort much better.