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Old 06-01-2010, 10:46 AM   #13
sibyl vane.
 
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Originally Posted by Saya View Post
Reminds me of The Cure.
That's what I thought!

Anyway, nice. I like the idea. It would've been easy to make this feel forced. If you hack away at it, I think it will, though.

You need practice. You should try writing every day.
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