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Originally Posted by Still Jack
What's nonconstructive about it. Add some wit and try and write less crudely.
Which is pretty much what I said in my first post...
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Meh, I guess you're right.
I'm no good at wit though, and it's written kinda crudely in some parts to reflect the mind of the child.
Still kinda unfair to compare me to a proffesional writer, wouldn't you say?
