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TwistedKitsune · 12-01-2005, 11:59 AM

oooo, nice tie in to the borrowed lines with the way you ended it, it's got some yummy rhythm too! I think that "But now I see that time is fleeting/Now I cherish every meeting./For "now" and "here" are all that last,/And "there" and "then" are in the past." has to be my favorite part of it, very nice...I dunno how to put it, but saying it out loud kinda leaves a nice taste in my mouth *grin*

12-01-2005, 11:59 AM	#644
TwistedKitsune Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 1,632	oooo, nice tie in to the borrowed lines with the way you ended it, it's got some yummy rhythm too! I think that "But now I see that time is fleeting/Now I cherish every meeting./For "now" and "here" are all that last,/And "there" and "then" are in the past." has to be my favorite part of it, very nice...I dunno how to put it, but saying it out loud kinda leaves a nice taste in my mouth grin __________________ "The true man wants two things: danger and play. For that reason he wants woman, as the most dangerous plaything." -Friedrich Nietzsche pssst, Morrigan, tokidoki shashin wa ii...