I like the subject matter. The thoughts of what love actually is, faith and trust in others... Though I'm not sure atheist is the best word to use for those that can't.
I think it's a good start and I'd like to see it polished up a bit. Maybe mention how people may be more attracted to the dangers and uncertainties of love other than the security that loyalty can bring.
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