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...Alright, your entire poem is pure shit. It is crap, terrible, awful, horrible, and any other negative adjectives you can come up with. Your poem wastes a lot of time showing your near-meaningless point that seems to be pasted on at last minute. It is incredibly angst, so much so, I get urges to cut myself by just reading it. You keep rambling on and on with the same theme, that you already covered for the last 3 shitty poems. It doesn't fucking go anywhere or does anything. Complete word garbage.
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