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Old 04-06-2011, 01:30 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by MissCheyenne View Post
^ I know it sounds trite but try to loosen up when you're writing. Trying to keep everything in a perfect little structure is often more harmful than helpful. Just let it flow, you can always re-work things afterwards.
That's much easier said than done, but I'll try to take your advice.
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