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Originally Posted by MissCheyenne
I like that much better. It might not seem like a huge change to have used other words in place of 'your' but to me, it reads much better now  |
I'm glad you like the change MissCheyenne. I agree, the small change was worth making.
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"An orphan's curse would drag to hell
A spirit from on high ;
But oh ! more horrible than that
Is the curse in a dead man's eye !
Seven days, seven nights, I saw that curse,
And yet I could not die."
-The Rime of the Ancient Mariner
by Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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