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Old 04-09-2011, 10:33 AM   #15
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Originally Posted by Mariner View Post
To be honest I think too much vibrant imagery makes the poem seem overdone. I like to leave things simple, with a phrase that sticks out here and there. It's just s stylistic thing, sorry you don't care for it.
I can see that, and in some cases I would agree with you about too much imagery being over done. Sometimes it's better to step back from overly descriptive language and strike a balance. Though judging by what you've said I'm guessing our ideas of the right balance are very different! haha
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