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Originally Posted by Sir Canvas Corpsey
I don't find it all that interesting, and it has zero flow in the actual reading, though there is some thematic flow in there, well in terms of the uncertainty of love and attempt to discern the authenticity of a relationship through what seems like an overload of intimacy.
Does a lobotomy hurt? I was under the impression the brain was incapable of feeling pain.
The last three lines are a god awful attempt at relational unity while totally protecting the idea of individuality in a relationship, and should be compared with the cheesy cringe factor of my signature quote being used as anything other than a statement of fact on the nature of individuality, culture, and the world at large.
It reads more like a monologue from a play rather than poetry.
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I watched a documentary on lobotomy, I assumed that since many who got it couldn't open their eyes afterwards due to them being swollen and bruised that it must hurt.
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"An orphan's curse would drag to hell
A spirit from on high ;
But oh ! more horrible than that
Is the curse in a dead man's eye !
Seven days, seven nights, I saw that curse,
And yet I could not die."
-The Rime of the Ancient Mariner
by Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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