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Originally Posted by MissCheyenne
I'm of the opposite opinion to M.O.C and to me, it seems quite old fashioned in places. I don't see new age in it all. The last four lines in particular have a somewhat old fashioned feel to them in my opinion. The middle section, especially the last two lines, seems very sexualised to me. Not overtly sexy but with a definite sexual element to it.
I like it, you're very good Ophelia, I'm somewhat jealous of your talent.
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Thank you. It is sexualized, most of my writing is, particularly recently. Anything about it you didn't think worked well?
And don't be jealous; I'm a hack.