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Originally Posted by Apathy's_Child
Yeah... I'd like to pretend it's a stylistic choice building up to something clever, but the truth is, it's just a tonal inconsistency - the storyline for this is bastardized from something else I'm writing which is way less slapstick than Gnet fanfic, and although none of the dialogue and only some of the storyline is the same, I guess I just keep falling back into a darker tone. In retrospect using that storyline was probably a mistake, as I think there may wind up being so many plot-strands it starts getting hard to follow. I guess I'll see how it goes and if I can simplify it further. Hopefully I'll find my feet and the comedy will start to come more naturally as I settle into it.
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Oh, I didn't mean I don't think it's funny - just that it's not the all-out parody of the Zombopocalypse one and is quite different in tone. It's not necessarily a bad thing; just passing comment.
I still wanna fire a rocket launcher. 
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