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Old 01-31-2014, 04:40 AM   #4
Lady Ruthven
 
Join Date: Jan 2014
Location: Upon the wings of night
Posts: 62
Well they're better than mine!

Personally, I preferred the first one. Something about the rhyme scheme I think.

If this is your beginner work, you're a good writer. Keep going!
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