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This isn't "story", this is interlude. I don't care about these people, I don't care about the victim and I don't even have any graphic violence or sexual gratification which ought to be the easy part. I want something really dark, twisted, bizarre, perverted, original or at least just gross before I want someone to hand it to me and ask how they're doing so far. This is 2nd rate filler material for a full-length novel. Also, I think you're Sin's_Luver as well. I said it before, More Work.
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