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Originally Posted by black_fairy
Mmmm... Maybe the idea is good, but I find that story a little... strange.
I think it's confusing, I'd like the explanations more detailed in some places.
The story isn't very much structured (beginning, unrolling and end, I don't know if you understand me..), if you are starting to write, this is a very important thing.
I suppose it's a fantasy story, but I find it has too coincidences...
I hope I haven't been too hard...... :oops:
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You have not at all been too hard. I appreciate your trying to be polite about it but as I said before, I appreciate any and all opinions.
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