my life...........

[lonelyd00d]

i wake up everday
just to die more
as i struggle to cope
with a load to big

all this work
all my friends
all my family

no one has love.

[skateboard pro]

cool but maybe use longer sentences not bad though.. is it ur first poem?? looks like it but its ok!!

[lonelyd00d]

Originally Posted by skateboard pro

cool but maybe use longer sentences not bad though.. is it ur first poem?? looks like it but its ok!!

ya it is.. thnx dood... im just so angry cuz i got grounded for smokin n stayin out past curfew.. so i need 2 vent i thought it wuz good for a first try tho

[skateboard pro]

yeah its ok ive been like that before... ur clothes smell like cigs, parents flip, yadda yadda..

[lonelyd00d]

Originally Posted by skateboard pro

yeah its ok ive been like that before... ur clothes smell like cigs, parents flip, yadda yadda..

ya... my mom is such a hypocryt... she smokes a pak a day!!! n i only stayed out till 10 n my curfew is 9 thats ridiculus!!! n at skool 2day i got soo much hw.. fuk it im not doing it.

[skateboard pro]

cool.........