suicide note part 2

The Antichrist · 09-14-2008, 11:18 PM

They first one didn't go to well so I decided to take another shot at it.

Out of my mind, gun up to the mouth
No pretension, execution, live and learn
**** and turn
Fret not family, nor pre-judged army
This is for me, and me only, cowards only
Try it

Don't you try to die, like me
It's livid and it's lies and makes graves

It's not worth the time to try, to replenish a
rotting life
I'll end the problem, facing nothing, fuck you off,
fuck you all
Tortured history, addict of misery, this exposes me
for weakness is a magnet - watch me do it

Graves descending down
Why would you help anyone who doesn't want it,
doesn't need it, doesn't want your shit advice
when a mind's made up to go ahead and die?
What's done is done and gone, so why cry?

onedarkly1 · 09-14-2008, 11:45 PM

I liked your first one better. I can't put my finger on it, but this one doesn't seem to flow as well to me. I will give it some thought and try to come up with something more concrete.
___________________________________________
"I died a long time ago."

The Antichrist · 09-14-2008, 11:58 PM

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Originally Posted by onedarkly1

I liked your first one better. I can't put my finger on it, but this one doesn't seem to flow as well to me. I will give it some thought and try to come up with something more concrete.
___________________________________________
"I died a long time ago."

Ok.In a couple more days I might try again.I got to get in the suicide state of mind.

gothicusmaximus · 09-15-2008, 12:40 AM

Should suicide notes really have sequels?

The Antichrist · 09-15-2008, 12:56 AM

no.I know I should have called this thread something different.

Heavenly_Goth · 09-20-2008, 06:44 PM

again an amazing piece for a person who has tried to commit suicide.....alot of people don't understand how a suicidal person feels but this shows it in a way.

Saya · 09-20-2008, 06:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Heavenly_Goth

again an amazing piece for a person who has tried to commit suicide.....alot of people don't understand how a suicidal person feels but this shows it in a way.

Not really, its this sort of poem and pretty much every single suicide poem I have ever read that brings me to a conclusion that most people must try to kill themselves because they are throwing a tantrum.

TheBloodEternity · 09-27-2008, 11:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Heavenly_Goth

again an amazing piece for a person who has tried to commit suicide.....alot of people don't understand how a suicidal person feels but this shows it in a way.

Would you shut up about how you tried to kill yourself? We get it, okay? And, yeah, actually, a lot of people do. I know a lot of people who've had their rock bottom moments where suicide crossed their mind. Hell, it'd be easier for me to count those that haven't been suicidal at one point in time, even if it was just for a second.
people that try with some half-assed attempt that really wasn't a danger to their life in the first place then come back and whine about how "they tried to kill themselves" are just throwing tantrums or looking for attention. If you had had a real problem you would have been hospitalized, you don't have a near death experience and just come running back to spew about how suicidal and dark and depressed you are.

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-27-2008, 11:13 PM

Another Pantera ripoff.....What The Fuck are you trying to pull you fucking ass clown?

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-27-2008, 11:32 PM

Is your next "work" going to be Cowboys from hell?

Sir Canvas Corpsey · 09-28-2008, 01:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Deadmanwalking_05

Is your next "work" going to be Cowboys from hell?

I totally wrote some poems xD

The Art of Shredding
bad poems on paper
is best achieved
with hands alone.

Me at a newspaper factory
would be my Psycho Holiday,
giggling in glee,
as the manager sees
himself
at
the Cemetery Gates

Bah, I'm too lazy to continue and research this plagarism myself, but I'll trust deadman on this one, I see no reason why he should lie about this.

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-28-2008, 01:24 AM

Thanks Sir_C.C.
Anybody that doubts it though and thinks I'm being a prick,just check out the link I posted in "Suicide Note" The link has both songs.

Sir Canvas Corpsey · 09-28-2008, 01:28 AM

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Wow Antichrist, you are really pathetic, at least rip off an artist who no one would know next time. If you're going to lie, at least do it so that no one will find out.

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-28-2008, 01:30 AM

They are the same songs (But the link will play Part1 then Part2,whoever uploaded them put both as one post)

Sir Canvas Corpsey · 09-28-2008, 01:32 AM

Yeah, I got off my ass to look at it just before you posted and then I edited and then you posted and now we're back here.

I restate what my above post says: (just 'cause I can, teehee!)

Wow Antichrist, you are really pathetic, at least rip off an artist who no one would know next time. If you're going to lie, at least do it so that no one will find out.

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-28-2008, 01:38 AM

So would I be safe in saying that I just busted his ass like a looter in a riot?

If so, as Ole' Stone Cold would say "Give me a hell yeah!"

Sir Canvas Corpsey · 09-28-2008, 01:43 AM

You busted him but not so extravagantly...

Initially, without having seen the lyrics myself, I thought he may have appropriated some lines from the songs (which is still pretty pathetic)

Deadmanwalking_05 · 09-28-2008, 01:46 AM

That last bit was just for show.

The Antichrist · 10-02-2008, 08:51 AM

It's about fucking time someone figured it out.I was wondering how long it took.Btw for all you assholes this was put up as a joke.

Joker_in_the_Pack · 10-02-2008, 01:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Heavenly_Goth

again an amazing piece for a person who has tried to commit suicide.....alot of people don't understand how a suicidal person feels but this shows it in a way.

Since you keep talking about how you tried to kill yourself I have some advice that would benifit most of the world, keep trying.