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Old 06-02-2010, 09:41 AM   #1
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Light of Heart

Having fun is just a myth,
It's only for the light of heart,
Which I am not,
Passing soul within my grasp,
You are light of heart,
You act like you're five,
Yet you are fourteen,
I think of you as childish,
Yet I admire you for that
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Old 06-06-2010, 11:16 PM   #2
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Having fun is just a myth,
It's only for the light of heart,
Which I am not,
Passing soul within my grasp,
You are light of heart,
You act like you're five,
Yet you are fourteen,
I think of you as childish,
Yet I admire you for that
Greetings gothicrose,

What I like about this poem is its last line ~ how it completely changes the mood from condescension to a sad, respectful envy. Thanks for sharing your work.
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