Eat me up, World

[GothPunkBitch]

I came here to post this, hope you guys and girls like.


Oh world, why did you have to drag me here
My eyes, stinging and burning as you cast your wicked spells.
Be gone, for I will not struggle with the evil that is man
And cast away his ferocious words with the flick of a wrist.

What have I done for this?
You mumble incoherently,
I await an answer, a token
of your appreciation for my life.
And still nothing.

If you cannot accept me, Eat me up
World. I cannot stand nor bear the brutality
of this life. And with this thought, I stare my knife.
You must choose, or I will.
Eat me up, World.

[HowRedIsHe]

Thats deep brother, like the ocean, but like the ocean, we dont know how deep. What lies at the bottom of the ocean? Bodies? Treasure? Michael jackson? These are the questions i ask :/

[Moogwai]

I just came reading that.

[GothPunkBitch]

Thanks girls. I do like you for saying that. OMG!!!!!!!

[ape descendant]

Personally, I find it rather typical and self absorbed..... unless it is really awesome satire... it really seems to be the epitome of bad goth poetry, the only thing its missing are blood and bats, however the suicide innuendo does replace them quite neatly.

[Apathy's_Child]

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