Why- An emo poem

Lucifirius · 10-18-2010, 04:31 PM

My heart is gone
My love destroyed
She who lied
What have I done?

What is she
To have her lie
Why did she do that
Why me?

My heart is weak
My wrists are bare
The knife- it's bare
Blood

Versus · 10-18-2010, 06:33 PM

What's that about, man? It seems really deep.

Lucifirius · 10-18-2010, 06:54 PM

about heartbreak

Versus · 10-18-2010, 07:35 PM

Oh I see now. I'm writing a poem about heartbreak, too... but it's not very good... I'm not sure which word I should use to describe my heart. What do you think?

Fracture: V-n
frac..ture [frak-cher]
The act of breaking; state of being broken.

Schism: V-n
schis-m [siz-uhm, skiz-]
A separation or division into factions.

Rupture: V-n
rup..ture..[ruhp-cher]
The process or instance of breaking open or bursting.

Division: V-n
di..vi..sion [di-vizh-uhn]
The proportional distribution of a quantity or entity.

Crack: V-n
crack [krak]
To break without complete separation of parts; fissure:

Spit:
split [split] V-n
To tear or break apart; rend or burst.

Discontinuity: N
dis..con..ti..nu..i..ty [dis-kon-tn-oo-i-tee, -yoo-]
A break or gap.

Disjoint: V
dis..joint..ed..[dis-join-tid]
To destroy the coherence or connections of.

Rend: V-n
rend..[rend]
To tear or split apart or into pieces violently.

Tear: V-n
tear2 [tair]
To pull apart or in pieces by force, esp. so as to leave ragged or irregular edges.

Breach: 1. N-v, 2. N-v
breach [breech]
1. a. An opening, a tear, or a rupture.
2. A violation or infraction, as of a law, a legal obligation, or a promise.

Cleave: V
cleave2 [kleev]
To split with or as if with a sharp instrument.

"Heartbreak: N
heart..break [hahrt-breyk]
Overwhelming sorrow, grief, or disappointment.",

*Twitch · 10-18-2010, 07:59 PM

I suspect troll

Versus · 10-18-2010, 08:06 PM

I couldn't find a good clip of the memory eraser thing from Men in Black.

Unless you mean him, because I think he's legitimate.

Lucifirius · 10-19-2010, 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Versus

Oh I see now. I'm writing a poem about heartbreak, too... but it's not very good... I'm not sure which word I should use to describe my heart. What do you think?

Fracture: V-n
frac..ture [frak-cher]
The act of breaking; state of being broken.

Schism: V-n
schis-m [siz-uhm, skiz-]
A separation or division into factions.

Rupture: V-n
rup..ture..[ruhp-cher]
The process or instance of breaking open or bursting.

Division: V-n
di..vi..sion [di-vizh-uhn]
The proportional distribution of a quantity or entity.

Crack: V-n
crack [krak]
To break without complete separation of parts; fissure:

Spit:
split [split] V-n
To tear or break apart; rend or burst.

Discontinuity: N
dis..con..ti..nu..i..ty [dis-kon-tn-oo-i-tee, -yoo-]
A break or gap.

Disjoint: V
dis..joint..ed..[dis-join-tid]
To destroy the coherence or connections of.

Rend: V-n
rend..[rend]
To tear or split apart or into pieces violently.

Tear: V-n
tear2 [tair]
To pull apart or in pieces by force, esp. so as to leave ragged or irregular edges.

Breach: 1. N-v, 2. N-v
breach [breech]
1. a. An opening, a tear, or a rupture.
2. A violation or infraction, as of a law, a legal obligation, or a promise.

Cleave: V
cleave2 [kleev]
To split with or as if with a sharp instrument.

"Heartbreak: N
heart..break [hahrt-breyk]
Overwhelming sorrow, grief, or disappointment.",

Rend, Rupture, and Fracture.

Rage · 01-10-2012, 06:09 PM

Pain without love pain can't get enough

Rage · 01-10-2012, 06:11 PM

Eh whose with me PAIN