I wrote a song!

[TheHandThatFeeds]

A small warning: Contains touchy subjects and swearing.

Who are you to judge...
Who are you to judge...
Who are you to judge...
Yeah who the fuck are you to judge?!

I'm judging you!
Yeah I'm judging you!
You are nothing, you are filth, you are a rapist on a hill!
Hangin' by the gallows, the birds picking your eyes!
Fucking your skull as you fucked the girl's!
Did they ask for it? Did they beg for it?
No I dont think so, you're just a fucking r a p i n g pig!

Fuck sexsism!
Discrimination!
Fuck sexsism!
Discriminatiooon!

You are a large guy, the greater sex!
Bravo kid, thats fucking messed!
You got the muscles, you got the force.
But she has the brain, 'n she'll spike you to the cross!
No mercy! We got the judge, and we're judging you for her greater loss!

Fuck sexsism!
Discrimination!
Fuck sexsism!
Discriminatioon!

I'm lookin' at yah on the ground, strangled by your tie!
Was it fucking worth it, worth to crash her life?!
You had a urge, a urge to r a p e!
Now you smashed it all, she got the miserable fate!

Fuck sexsism!
Discrimination!
Fuck sexsism!
Discriminatioon!

I'm judging you...

[vindicatedxjin]

......I like the concept. But the way it was written was kind of lame.

[zerademark]

It's not bad. The style reminds me of System of Down.

[Verdog]

I don't like the song, or the meaning, but I like this line, and how it's constructed.

"I'm lookin' at yah on the ground, strangled by your tie!"

[Niccolo della Luce]

I like the Chaos present in the lyrics. Very good subject matter, and it definitely gets its point across very well. However, may I suggest perhaps that you expand the vocabulary of the peice? It is very good, but I think that with a few more mature words, it can be even better.

Excellent concept!

[Bete Noire]

"Fuck sexsism!"

...

Ha

[Shadow5]

It's so agressive... but not bad.

[Niccolo della Luce]

Makes for some good hXc.