Don't be worried =]
I just posted something too [Literature], and my heart was pounding out of my chest- I was so nervous! xD
You respond to critisism well and you seem like you want to learn and improve. Once everybody sees that, they will critisize you much less. =]
They've just been tough on the newbs lateley... Though if you havn't posted an introduction please do. There is a questionair that needs to be filled out...
https://www.gothic.net/boards/showthread.php?t=1644
Thank you! ^^

Definitely I'll give him that, and it's something big to have.
But Joe, you have to read more poetry. Look for works by Herbert Spencer, Percy Shelley, Alexander Pope, and obviously Shakespeare.
They all have very different styles, so you can learn about them all.
Look at the beauty of their poems. They don't just write when they have nothing to do. Each poem is meticulously polished to perfection after an epiphany.
Anything you write because you had the idea to write, consider it exercise. Real poetry doesn't come unless you came to a realization of life.
You don't go chiseling a block of marble to give it a vague form and then see what you can do with that form. You discover the art imprisoned in the block and simply let it out. That's art.

Good goth...I understand your criticism, of how his themes are cliched. Yet I myself can never see me harshly shunning someone as a writer. This is used to many of you here, of course. And I most definatley have no problem with that. However, when I see a poem I like I am going to say it. For a newcomer this work was good if you take out the typos. It's understandable to think he's a troll, but you just haven't let him speak. The first thing he in Gnet was your response. And I would take this as productive criticism, but it's just his first time. Gothic.net has disappointed me with the new arrvials.
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Groan...the asshole I am talking about, regarding the other posts, has haressed me for my writing, what I've said; and I hate this person. It (for no longer do I see this has a sensible being) has been a shithole and IT'S writing sucks so much that it's laughable. I despise this person for it's traumatized me and embaressed me publicly here. And HP, I am sorry but I shall NEVER forgive that person. Never. If he or she replies again, I might as well leave this hellhole. I am disappointed in you all. I am disappointed and disgusted. I should leave. I should. But I can't. This place is like home, and yet you are the rose, and this person, who has harassed me for so long and caused me so much pain, are thorns. Not the black thorns, but the thorns that pierce my flesh each time I visit here. I should leave. But I can't.

Goth Forever
Goth Forever
Goth Forever

I don't ever remember anyone humiliating you...?
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Great. Right. That's because it happened months before you joined. And HumanePain, I love that you're nice to everyone on this site usually, but I don't love that you favour someone whose caused me so much pain. The same applies with you, Jillian. And I'm usually ignored by you guys.


Goth Forever

It's ok... I alot of people on this site ignore me...
and if it happened months ago, why is it suddanly hitting you now? Sorry If I am getting too personal... I have no other way of contacting you outside of Gnet...

God there's so many answers for that. I've been fueding with my family, and this was for a long time one of the few places I could escape for a bit here. I never thought of it constantley or with emotion, though. But being haressed here and in real life is hell. I fear that with these haressments, this newcomer will endure the thoughts of Jillian's criticism and emotionally it will destroy him. Everyone outside will notice him upset because of this. But how can he explain he joined a forum when he's already embaressed to show what Jillian said about his writing? But this always happens.

Goth Forever

Look, I've had to endure my share of backstabbing on the internet in general, as well as in real life. When people insult me, it hurts. It hurts any and everyone. But I use it to make something beautiful, and to get stronger from it. Every hit makes you stronger; remember that.

Guess that's reasonable. Thank you Aaroneet.
Goth Forever

As they in french, "Ce n'est pas grave".
("It was no big deal".)

At least DarkRevalations got any replies at all. Just lookit my double-poem post. None! *cuts himself with a stuffed rabbit*

Oh, I saw that...

*goes to comment*

The poem is not that bad, but it needs to be capitalized, and needs to be proofred.