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Unimatrix 00 10-10-2008 06:05 PM

You too can make your own poem!
 
List 5 important moments in your life.

Then when you have done that, put "I am" in front of each moment.

It is poetry.

Unimatrix 00 10-10-2008 06:08 PM

I am The moment when I came out of my mothers womb.

I am The time I bought my first piece of makeup.

I am The day I bought my first dog.

I am The time my grandparents died.

I am The moment I came to a realisation.

Elysiume 10-12-2008 10:18 AM

I am My thirteenth birthday.
I am The time I bought my first album.
I am The time I named my first cat.
I am The first funeral I attended.
I am The first poem i ever wrote, and definetely not the last.

noveleigh 10-13-2008 05:50 AM

I am The time I got into the university.
I am The time my mother dropped everything to help me escape a bad mistake.
I am The first time I've seen my father in a year.
I am The first time I braved a "haunted house".
I am The first time I'd picked up an instrument.

Fae-wolf 10-15-2008 02:09 AM

I am that first orgasm
I am that A after you didn't study
I am discovering new music
I am you
I am....huh?

~Laughs~

Dr Nancy 10-15-2008 04:47 AM

I am that day I decided not to care
I am the time I drew a heart on a bus pole
I am the time I realized I have S.A.D
I am that lunch time in primary school
I am three days ago.

jack_the_knife 10-15-2008 05:15 AM

I am the time I broke a bone
I am that day in winter.
I am the time I took a decision
I am the day I almost died
I am the day I decided not to care.

Duane 10-15-2008 08:23 AM

I am Duane's raging bile duct
I am Duane's cold sweat
I am Duane's complete lack of surprise
I am Duane's inflamed sense of rejection
I am Duane's smirking revenge
I am Duane's broken heart

dead_dreams 10-15-2008 08:42 AM

1. I'am the winter
2. I'am the snow you all play in
3. I'am the time I broke my ankle
4. I'am the day I missed the bus
5. I'am the time I gave up

jack_the_knife 10-15-2008 02:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Duane
I am Duane's raging bile duct
I am Duane's cold sweat
I am Duane's complete lack of surprise
I am Duane's inflamed sense of rejection
I am Duane's smirking revenge
I am Duane's broken heart

¨

You stole some of that from fight club , go into the corner, time out for you matey-boy. :D

Grimspective 10-15-2008 10:21 PM

I am the day I found my candles.
I am the day my brother died.
I am the day I woke up.
I am the day I walked away.
I am the day I stood up.

Duane 10-15-2008 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jack_the_knife
¨

You stole some of that from fight club , go into the corner, time out for you matey-boy. :D

That's what you think! It's false however, because I don't remember there being anything like this in Fight Club.

Kaali 10-16-2008 07:28 AM

I am the girl who never knew her father
I am the girl who sometimes wished she didn't know her mother
I am the child thrust from school to school, then taken out
I am the girl who made it into college, twice, against all odds
I am the artist whose life is just beginning

jack_the_knife 10-16-2008 07:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Duane
That's what you think! It's false however, because I don't remember there being anything like this in Fight Club.

Smirking Revenge and Lack of surprise definitely were, you may not of stole them intentionally. but I distinctly remember the lines being in the film.

Duane 10-16-2008 10:24 AM

I must watch it to confirm that statement.

Steppenwolf 10-16-2008 11:58 AM

I am a moment in perfect harmony with myself
I am a moment concious about the sea of time and the greatness of all
I am a single teardrop of mad happiness
I am the one who was touched by beauty again and again
I am the love burning and exploding inside my isolation

(god , I am so many things ...)

dead_dreams 10-16-2008 07:35 PM

I'am the day suicide entered my mind.
I'am the day I began to laugh.
I'am the day I began to live again.
I'am the day I wished it would all end.
I'am the teen that lives in your imagination.

Joker_in_the_Pack 10-17-2008 02:19 AM

I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.

jack_the_knife 10-17-2008 02:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joker_in_the_Pack
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.

That made me laugh so hard my lungs hurt. :D

Apathy's_Child 10-17-2008 03:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dead_dreams
I'am the teen that lives in your imagination.

No, you are most definitely the teen that resides in the realm of the everyday and the mundane.

gothicusmaximus 10-17-2008 01:38 PM

I am the time I skimmed this thread
I am the immediately subsequent time I vomited all over my keyboard

JCC 10-17-2008 01:51 PM

Yeah, I'd say something but everyone already stole my jokes.

MegearaErotica 10-17-2008 08:20 PM

Wtf?! This thread completely ruined my day and, at the same time, shitted all over the face of true poetry. I hate you all.

StrangeLove 10-18-2008 02:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joker_in_the_Pack
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.


It bears repeating.

a morbid curiosity 10-19-2008 09:06 AM

Isn't this "I am" poetry thing in the new UK advertisement for Orange phones?


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