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10-10-2008, 06:05 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Lansing, Iowa. Come visit me, yes, no?
Posts: 1,033
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You too can make your own poem!
List 5 important moments in your life.
Then when you have done that, put "I am" in front of each moment.
It is poetry.
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10-10-2008, 06:08 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Lansing, Iowa. Come visit me, yes, no?
Posts: 1,033
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I am The moment when I came out of my mothers womb.
I am The time I bought my first piece of makeup.
I am The day I bought my first dog.
I am The time my grandparents died.
I am The moment I came to a realisation.
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10-12-2008, 10:18 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Between Fascination and Fear
Posts: 1,116
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I am My thirteenth birthday.
I am The time I bought my first album.
I am The time I named my first cat.
I am The first funeral I attended.
I am The first poem i ever wrote, and definetely not the last.
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10-13-2008, 05:50 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Louisville, TN
Posts: 118
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I am The time I got into the university.
I am The time my mother dropped everything to help me escape a bad mistake.
I am The first time I've seen my father in a year.
I am The first time I braved a "haunted house".
I am The first time I'd picked up an instrument.
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10-15-2008, 02:09 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 182
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I am that first orgasm
I am that A after you didn't study
I am discovering new music
I am you
I am....huh?
~Laughs~
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10-15-2008, 04:47 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Australia
Posts: 88
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I am that day I decided not to care
I am the time I drew a heart on a bus pole
I am the time I realized I have S.A.D
I am that lunch time in primary school
I am three days ago.
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10-15-2008, 05:15 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 1,138
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I am the time I broke a bone
I am that day in winter.
I am the time I took a decision
I am the day I almost died
I am the day I decided not to care.
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10-15-2008, 08:23 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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I am Duane's raging bile duct
I am Duane's cold sweat
I am Duane's complete lack of surprise
I am Duane's inflamed sense of rejection
I am Duane's smirking revenge
I am Duane's broken heart
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10-15-2008, 08:42 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: United States
Posts: 761
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1. I'am the winter
2. I'am the snow you all play in
3. I'am the time I broke my ankle
4. I'am the day I missed the bus
5. I'am the time I gave up
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10-15-2008, 02:04 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 1,138
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Originally Posted by Duane
I am Duane's raging bile duct
I am Duane's cold sweat
I am Duane's complete lack of surprise
I am Duane's inflamed sense of rejection
I am Duane's smirking revenge
I am Duane's broken heart
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You stole some of that from fight club , go into the corner, time out for you matey-boy. 
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10-15-2008, 10:21 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 15
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I am the day I found my candles.
I am the day my brother died.
I am the day I woke up.
I am the day I walked away.
I am the day I stood up.
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10-15-2008, 10:33 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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Originally Posted by jack_the_knife
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You stole some of that from fight club , go into the corner, time out for you matey-boy. |
That's what you think! It's false however, because I don't remember there being anything like this in Fight Club.
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10-16-2008, 07:28 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: New York
Posts: 89
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I am the girl who never knew her father
I am the girl who sometimes wished she didn't know her mother
I am the child thrust from school to school, then taken out
I am the girl who made it into college, twice, against all odds
I am the artist whose life is just beginning
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10-16-2008, 07:44 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 1,138
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Originally Posted by Duane
That's what you think! It's false however, because I don't remember there being anything like this in Fight Club.
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Smirking Revenge and Lack of surprise definitely were, you may not of stole them intentionally. but I distinctly remember the lines being in the film.
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10-16-2008, 10:24 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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I must watch it to confirm that statement.
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10-16-2008, 11:58 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: CA
Posts: 667
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I am a moment in perfect harmony with myself
I am a moment concious about the sea of time and the greatness of all
I am a single teardrop of mad happiness
I am the one who was touched by beauty again and again
I am the love burning and exploding inside my isolation
(god , I am so many things ...)
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Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation.
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10-16-2008, 07:35 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: United States
Posts: 761
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I'am the day suicide entered my mind.
I'am the day I began to laugh.
I'am the day I began to live again.
I'am the day I wished it would all end.
I'am the teen that lives in your imagination.
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10-17-2008, 02:19 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius
Posts: 1,750
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I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
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Because before too long there'll be nothing left alive, not a creature on the land or sea, a bird in the sky. They'll be shot, harpooned, eaten, and hunted too much, vivisected by the clever men who prove that there's no such things as a fair world with live and let live. The Royal family go hunting, what an example to give to the people they lead and that don't include me, I've seen enough pain and torture of those who can't speak...
- Tough Shit, Mickey by Conflict
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10-17-2008, 02:50 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 1,138
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Originally Posted by Joker_in_the_Pack
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
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That made me laugh so hard my lungs hurt.
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10-17-2008, 03:37 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,721
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Originally Posted by dead_dreams
I'am the teen that lives in your imagination.
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No, you are most definitely the teen that resides in the realm of the everyday and the mundane.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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10-17-2008, 01:38 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,687
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I am the time I skimmed this thread
I am the immediately subsequent time I vomited all over my keyboard
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10-17-2008, 01:51 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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Yeah, I'd say something but everyone already stole my jokes.
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10-17-2008, 08:20 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Florida
Posts: 1,065
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Wtf?! This thread completely ruined my day and, at the same time, shitted all over the face of true poetry. I hate you all.
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Oh, but you can't expect to wield supreme executive power just because some watery tart threw a sword at you. If I went 'round sayin' I was Emperor, just because some moistened bint lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away.
-Monty Python and the Holy Grail
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10-18-2008, 02:48 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: upstate NY
Posts: 59
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Originally Posted by Joker_in_the_Pack
I am annoyed that Unimatrix made a game that will undoubtedly lead to lewdies making tons of this cookie cutter bollocks you call poetry and thinking they're the next fucking Shakespeare.
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It bears repeating.
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10-19-2008, 09:06 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: In front of a computer screen.
Posts: 584
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Isn't this "I am" poetry thing in the new UK advertisement for Orange phones?
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