Okay...
http://www.myspace.com/tailybones
Check it out. There's LOTS of musicians on here. This is, the VERY VERY first thing I've ever actually made. I would have liked to have used real instruments for the most part, but this is just more or less a learning thing right now.
So, what I'd like to know is just some pointers, really. I know this song needs a prayer and lots of work. So... what are some things that are blatantly wrong and what are some things that can be improved?
Thanks for all the constructional crits.
