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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 05-12-2007, 11:54 AM   #1
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A voice calls betwixt the willow branches in the immaculate sky,

I lament for it, but without reason or rhyme.

"What troubles lie within those eyes so bright

That I should discover your presence so late at night?"

The melancholy monotone hath consorted me through

myriad a strife

But this has brought too great a life.

Destiny would not bare the sight of one without a care.

No, tender apparition, your nature is only the bitter air

I will not emit an answer to one who is not there!

O', for a minute it seemed real

Prince of immortality, I would more than kneel.

Wherein he could grant me an ounce of pleasure

for a pound of pain,

Suspending, surreal disdain

Could this be infatuation's desire

A dance of two spirits intertwining?

"Yes", his will is mine.

There lies a calling within the depths of my soul

Which shall be answered my he, whom I could never know.
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Old 05-12-2007, 10:12 PM   #2
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I love the flow. I love the play on words. Though according to the context and subject matter of my own poem, I'm surprised that it reminded you of this.

Nevertheless, good stuff.
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Old 05-13-2007, 06:02 AM   #3
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Maybe it was a certain line in your poem that reminded me of this.
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