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Old 11-13-2009, 10:32 AM   #1
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Red face Drowning for me...
I can only imagine your face before me
Staring deep into my eyes
Searching for the emptiness that consumes me
And the fire that no longer burns in my heart

Swimming deep into my dark soul
You drown in my sorrows
Reaching the depth of my self pity
You suddenly find the bottom of my loneliness

I try to rescue you with my dripping tears
You try to reach up, only to find my shadowed soul
Obstructed by my abysmal desperation for salvation
You become engulfed by your own sensations

But then, not giving up hope
You struggle one last time
Breaking all my chains of fear and delusions
Only to find my broken heart and bring it back to life

Restoring my love for you, forever and in debt to you
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Old 11-15-2009, 04:47 PM   #2
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that was so touching
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Old 11-15-2009, 07:54 PM   #3
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Wonderful and thought provoking.
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Old 11-28-2009, 02:16 PM   #4
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That was fucking gay.
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Old 11-28-2009, 02:19 PM   #5
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That was fucking gay.
HAHAHAHAGHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just did a tiny wee laughing at that.
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Old 11-28-2009, 02:52 PM   #6
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HAHAHAHAGHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just did a tiny wee laughing at that.
I actually read that in my head in an Irish accent and it made me giggle ^__^
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Old 11-28-2009, 03:05 PM   #7
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I bet you're hot for me now.
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Old 11-29-2009, 02:28 PM   #8
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Dude, just chill.
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Old 11-30-2009, 03:23 AM   #9
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It's like someone took a dump on a keyboard and then added some eyeliner.
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