Hia im new!!

Young-goth · 09-17-2006, 07:24 AM

Hi im new to this site! I dont have many hobbies but i like to listen to music in my room, My favourite author is Anne Rice. My favourite film is salems lot by steaven King, its the one with the vampires. At my wedding i dont no what song i want played but i want it to be original, maybe ill write a song? who knows. At my funeral i want the song spirit in the sky by dr and the medics to be played and heaven is a halfpipe. id want a coffin lined with red velvet made from painted black wood with red and black roses on (im very original, not) my favourite outfit hmm thats hard i like my black combats with my death kitty top the one with clip on arms and my spikey belt which has chains on, not sure if it all matches but oh well. my favourite band well i have lots but i love hawthorne heights. I joined because i need alot of help with my clothes where to shop my hair EVERYTHING im only 13 so dont get alot of money

And im a girl called gracie!!! Thank you if you managed to read all of this lol.

HumanePain · 09-17-2006, 08:01 AM

Good Morning Gracie: I did manage to read all the way to the end, even if your grammar made it very difficult. It will help you a LOT around here if you could improve your English so readers can understand you without distracting typos and Instant Message style abbreviations. The distractions interrupt the thought flow of what you are trying to say.

Typing "i dont no what song" as "I don't know which song" will go further in gaining respect for your mind from other's.

I once used lower case "i" too instead of "I", believing I was communicating modesty, but on a site that is heavy with Literature, and intelligent Goths who are avid readers, correct grammar is preferred.

Thanks for answering the questions. I hope you take my advice in the kind spirit it was intended, sorry if it seems petty.

Young-goth · 09-17-2006, 08:08 AM

I shall try to improve my grammer though my spelling is very bad! Thank you for the advice.

HumanePain · 09-17-2006, 08:09 AM

You're welcome!

Godslayer Jillian · 09-17-2006, 01:00 PM

Like sandpaper to my eyes.

HumanePain · 09-17-2006, 02:55 PM

Yes, agreed.