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Old 11-07-2006, 10:37 AM   #1
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Daddy's Fault

This is a poem/lyric I wrote. Before I post it I just want to say this is not to make fun of people who went through it or offend like some people though it was. I write stuff that I or someone I know went through so please don't get offended.


He told me I was his little girl
He promised to give me the whole world
Come here my precious little slut
I was nothing more than daddy's little fuck

Slide this razor across my wrist
I managed to feel my daddy's fist
Daddy listen to my cries
you're the cause of my suicide

I was trapped in his sick little world
I was suppose to be his little girl
Blood ran down my thighs as he penetrated me
Daddy's little slut is what God wants me to be?
How can he let this happen? Is he even there?
In this holy bible is says he is suppose to care!
Everything I've heard is just a bunch of lies.
No one to turn to now everyone I despise.

I slide this razor against my skin
Paying for my father's sin
How am I to abide?
Daddy it is your fault I committed suicide.

Nowhere to run and Nowhere to hide
My daddy wants to come inside
I am the key to his fantasy
This is the love he has for me.
Hush little baby don't you scream
Please let me wake up and find it is a bad dream.
***** and beaten by his fists
I take this razor and slit my wrists.
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Old 11-07-2006, 10:40 AM   #2
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Hey, check it out! It's a Poetry Thread!
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Old 11-07-2006, 12:35 PM   #3
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It would have been better to post it in the poetry section. I must say it's good, sick, but good.
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Old 11-07-2006, 12:53 PM   #4
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Uhm....................................Poetry thread is all I can say.
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