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Old 07-13-2008, 11:57 PM   #1
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Huntress’s Moon Arise

Huntress’s Moon Arise

Pale Luna she silently to rise
Her lights awoke me from sorrowful ice.
From my broken hearts,
Out of all these rotting parts,
I picked one of beautiful slice,
And wished I never trapped by regrets again.

Under Luna’s bless, I went to hunt for joys.

Beyond light of moon to reach,
Prey’s beauty I mesmerized to search,
Her beauty brightened like a star falling,
Red hair so warm she gently caressing,
Her blue eyes like sapphire shined out heart’s torch.
She was one of beauties I had beseech

I watched her, a withering rose waited for its demise.

I imagined, fulfilling my desires of lust,
Dreamed to sink fangs on snowy skin out of disgust,
Alas, she tempted me, an angel of sin!
A delicious bait to a shadow’s kin!
I pondered before the colorful slice of heart,
Prayed that loveless heart would rust,

But love to goddess had left me regrets.

Still waiting, still pondering, Luna she silently to rise.
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Old 07-14-2008, 12:01 AM   #2
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guh, this is the first poem I wrote in latest two years. I hope I still get it.
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Old 07-14-2008, 05:50 AM   #3
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it was a little choppy but great vivid imagery, i could see everything in my minds eye, and only a good poem can do that.
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