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Old 09-04-2009, 05:44 PM   #1
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Poet's Dance - lyrics
These go to a song I wrote not too long ago.. I'm curious as to what y'all think. *prepares for verbal beatdown*


Sick of the disrepute
Hell, sick is an understatement
What's the limit I must defy
When you place your world upon me?

Ignore it, abhor it, label me a freak
The bane of your existence
Show me your truth, I'll show you a lie
The fabulist you choose to be

Tell me I have no soul
Tell me I have no life
But justified
I am in my ways

Tell me I have no soul
Tell me I have no life
When blood runs cold
I'm not the one who lies

Lost in rhyme and subliminal values
Crafted with ardent artistry
Paint the pain of love and apprehension
Twisting fate with every line

No escape in this dream, this calling
This arcane trance of mine
Thought sinking deeper, midnight creeper
A poet's dance with time

Tell me I have no soul
Tell me I have no life
But justified
I am in my ways

Tell me I have no soul
Tell me I have no life
When blood runs cold
I'm not the one who lies
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Old 09-05-2009, 06:34 AM   #2
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its pretty good, i kind of liked it
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The world has no more room
For romantics such as this
And here is the cold truth
You're just another girl
With a decent pair of tits


Thank you.
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Why Kontan, you're getting more awesome by the day.
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Old 09-05-2009, 04:41 PM   #5
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It sounds like whiny emo shit.
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Old 09-05-2009, 05:43 PM   #6
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Kinda like your own 'lyrics'
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Old 09-06-2009, 04:49 PM   #7
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The world has no more room
For romantics such as this
And here is the cold truth
You're just another girl
With a decent pair of tits


Thank you.
So it was you who was peeking in my window? What the fuck, man?
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Old 09-08-2009, 04:54 PM   #8
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Kinda like your own 'lyrics'

Back that up with some proof. In your twisted little brain you probably don't know a difference between real and fake.
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Old 09-08-2009, 06:44 PM   #9
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Where the fuck did we begin talking about "real and fake"?
You said this is whiny emo shit. Want me to back that up? Just read your shit you call poetry.
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Old 09-12-2009, 03:01 PM   #10
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Where the fuck did we begin talking about "real and fake"?
You said this is whiny emo shit. Want me to back that up? Just read your shit you call poetry.
Real or fake? Whiny emo shit is fake. You can read my poetry....I've written it.
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