Shadow Realm

[Crying_Crimson_Tears]

Oh Humane, it'll turn into something.....mystifying.

[Crying_Crimson_Tears]

I am starting this all over now. I hate it, it sucks.

I need to fix this and start over. I have better ideas, better things to write.

[HumanePain]

I hope you don't change it too much, I like the main concept of a young heroine imbued with power inherited from her parents, and of course her tormentors that chase her provide the good vs. evil conflict that can drive the story. And I like the emotionalism, it pulls the reader's heartstrings to see the heroine suffer and cry; this provides character development which balances her strong and violent moments. A well rounded fleshing out of the main character.

I am looking forward to seeing how you change it. ^_^

[Crying_Crimson_Tears]

It needs more detail to me.

I want it to be novel length, not short story. I intended on a book.