uhhhh O.o
No offence, BUT (read: big but):
The story to it seems quite interesting, but you said you had worked on the character itself for quite some years now. I doubt you imagined the "exterior shell" yesterday so why not put a little more thought/art into it. Seems more like some 13 year old "I want to make some simple bucks"-way than a new kind of symbol for the gothic scene.
The character (visually) is as unattractive (read: non-identifyable) as a cockroach, other then that all you did was put some common phrases on underwear.
Besides that, I wouldn't even want to be caught dead in the stuff you're offering. Nice try, but a no-go for me!
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