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Old 07-21-2009, 02:07 PM   #1
Mike Rose
 
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I wrote this song/poem a while ago, and wanted to hear what thoughts it brings.

By the flash of light.
Everything is changed.
Why this way, I don't know.
Solemn vow of disentigration.

Angel in chains.
Please let me go.
Do remember me.
Cos' here I am.

As sun arises, change by doing.
Sacred vow is broken.
By the whispers of the night.
Hold me thight, by the thin line.

Dread at the night.
Plague by light of day.
Pillage me from inside out.
To take me down from nightmare.

Praise what you do have.
Remind me later by night.
To take you down now.
Never to let you return.
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