Thank you. I make it a point not to dislike constructive criticism, if I did my writing class wouldn't be very pleasant. Thank you for taking the time to make suggestions.
The phrase pyre was actually supposed to be quite literal, as in a funeral pyre. Since it's my writing that has made that unclear, do you have any ideas on how to make it clear? Or do you think that it's better just to abandon the whole ghost aspect of the poem and just write about a relationship that ended but had no real "physical" (as in the death of the speaker) consequences?
I'm open to all options, as this poem is in it's fledgling stages.
Alright, that makes sense.