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Tale of the Tiger
Despite how much I might regret this, I am going to post one of my poems anyway.
I hope to make my writing better so, please tell me anything that might make it better.
Any criticism is helpfull to me. Ok, let the blood bath start...
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Tale of the Tiger
Long live the crow that waits in wake of sunrise,
For my home gives him shelter from the cold caustic night,
Long live the lupine that waits at my door,
For the door shows the truth of his life and the outside, his death,
Long live the serpent that slitters across down my arm,
For he senses the evil outside and remains inside,
Their was once a tiger,
The tiger stood resillent outside,
Ready to face the cold nights,
Unafraid of life and death and embraced them with open arms,
He too knew the evil outside but was unafraid to lie alone,
He stood by the house of madness, longing to reclaim.
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Again any help is appreciated.
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