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10-25-2005, 11:57 AM
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I need some insight...
I am working on several books, one of which is about how the afterlife of a teenager boy's father returns as a dark force killing everything he had hated in the world before.....the father is later known as the Jester of Anger, and there are two more of these jesters....I need a title....can I get some insight?
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10-25-2005, 12:02 PM
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I see what you mean, I'm constantly change titles after I finish a new paragraph...but the only reason I use titles is to keep organized....as for the book, its not anywhere near done....I have another one "Eleven Thirty-Four", that I have worked vigorously on....I can post the first chapter of that....
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10-25-2005, 12:12 PM
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I know it will, I'm working right now...so are you all from college? You all sound so intellectual...
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10-25-2005, 12:14 PM
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Sure.....but not funny..."Unfunny"...like you said...
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10-25-2005, 12:18 PM
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I'm a freshman in high school...what about you?
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10-25-2005, 12:19 PM
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Is this a funny ha-ha or a funny uh-oh?
Why is this in General anyways?
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10-25-2005, 12:21 PM
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I don't know the answer to either question...
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10-25-2005, 12:22 PM
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I think it should be too, but I was having to pay attention to my Algebra 2 teacher while I did this...I know the difference...sorry....
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10-25-2005, 12:24 PM
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Just what I was thinking...and I'm not a newbie, I joined last month, but never posted....
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10-25-2005, 12:28 PM
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I know...it feels like you're yelling at me...
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10-25-2005, 12:29 PM
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I'm not a mod anymore, or I would. 
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10-25-2005, 12:30 PM
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Yeah...hey, does anyone want to read my stories?
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10-25-2005, 12:32 PM
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Yeah, and you can bite....hard....very hard....I am a vampire, one I created....guess what his name is?
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10-25-2005, 12:33 PM
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I'm about to leave....high school is about over...I wanted to stay longer...but my mom needs me...thanks guys, bye...
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10-25-2005, 12:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Lord Dagon
Yeah...hey, does anyone want to read my stories?
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Not the brightest bulb in the lamp factory, are you?
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10-25-2005, 03:10 PM
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Oh! I'm a regular! ^^ Just pay more attention to the forums before posting in the wrong one!
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10-25-2005, 03:22 PM
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Yay!!!! And sheer wootness!
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10-25-2005, 03:29 PM
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hey, secret - how goes the artistic pursuits?
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10-25-2005, 03:41 PM
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hey, secret - how goes the artistic pursuits?
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Eh, terrible. Not enough time to write these days. 40+ hour work...how did that happen?
Barely get stories out and they get rejected. Kind of a slump. Yours?
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10-25-2005, 03:45 PM
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i'm writing again after a year + block - and it feels pretty good, thanx. check out the literature section - 'writing contest' thread. there are a few coming up that'll force you to get your juices flowing if you make yourself sit.
surprisingly, that seemed to be my biggest problem - not sitting and writing.
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10-26-2005, 05:01 AM
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Originally Posted by Lord Dagon
I am working on several books, one of which is about how the afterlife of a teenager boy's father returns as a dark force killing everything he had hated in the world before.....the father is later known as the Jester of Anger, and there are two more of these jesters....I need a title....can I get some insight?
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sounds like that snowman movie with Micahel Keaton only with a dark twist.
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10-26-2005, 09:02 AM
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It does? Well, you'll see its completely different....who wants a copy of the first chapter for my other novel? 11:34.....thats the title...
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10-26-2005, 09:06 AM
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what about "the spirit that killed the world."
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10-26-2005, 09:19 AM
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For a title? I don't think I made myself very clear....he kills everything he hated before...and kills his mom....then wants to kill him (the teenage boy; Luke Almond)....he appears in a library after Luke and his friends break out of private school..the rest is still undecided....sort of...by the way, isn't the title you suggested from another movie or something?
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