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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 09-11-2009, 11:06 PM   #1
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Tears Will fall

A sense of sacred ceremony
Tries thine hearts divinity.
Or clustered crows may avail
If thine wishes one a slumberous night.

May risk the wishes of the bleak
If thou thinks himself too cheap.
Or expand all thine's gold
If he is to give band and hold.

Invite to court the masses
bringing bits of rainbow.
Or give the man some glasses
To read somber and low.

Either one is as important as the next
Though one is bright and one is less.
Love and love and if currently not
Either one would have or thought.
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Old 09-12-2009, 03:45 AM   #2
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Definately enjoying this one. I especially like the rhythm and the final stanza.

One of your better one's I've read from you. =]
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Old 09-12-2009, 02:55 PM   #3
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Interesting......
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Old 09-12-2009, 10:29 PM   #4
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Well thank you. Might you understand what it's about? I'm not really the type to write poems to be an Enigma ironically enough. I try to make sure people understand, in my opinion, what's the point if the audience doesn't get the message.
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